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Big Cats
It is curious
The big cats
When they choose
their prey.
Do they choose
very carefully
Before devouring
the innocent
Does a cougar
feel guilt
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Barry by princessyukisohma Barry :iconprincessyukisohma:princessyukisohma 0 0 Dex by princessyukisohma Dex :iconprincessyukisohma:princessyukisohma 1 0
In The End
You can tell everybody
That this is your poem
I just hope you don't mind
That I put it down in words
Sometimes I wonder what will happen
On that day-
That day I hope is many years away-
I wonder
Will I meet you
See you
Hear your voice
Even just to sense you-
would be great
But would you want to meet me
When I sail across the universe
I wouldn't blame you
If you don't
I'm a loser
I really hope you don't hate me
I hope you'd be okay
With the things I do and say
I need you
I wish I could have been there
All those years ago
Is there even a place
Or only sky
Will I meet you and you
And your sweet lord
I can't imagine
You not being there
I don't wanna face it
Never without you
When will it happen I wonder
When I'm young
When I'm old
When I'm 64
Will I wait a long time
If you want me to
I will
And what about them
Would it be abandonment
When I leave
To walk with you
What will they think
How will they feel
When I'm with you
Instead of them
Will they dance
will they cry
Singing That'
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Near a Cave by princessyukisohma Near a Cave :iconprincessyukisohma:princessyukisohma 3 0 Playing in the Dirt by princessyukisohma Playing in the Dirt :iconprincessyukisohma:princessyukisohma 3 0 Silly Girl by princessyukisohma Silly Girl :iconprincessyukisohma:princessyukisohma 2 2 I am the Eggman by princessyukisohma I am the Eggman :iconprincessyukisohma:princessyukisohma 3 1 New Fog Machine by princessyukisohma New Fog Machine :iconprincessyukisohma:princessyukisohma 1 2 Just a simple flower thing. by princessyukisohma Just a simple flower thing. :iconprincessyukisohma:princessyukisohma 2 0 This is a bit spicy... by princessyukisohma This is a bit spicy... :iconprincessyukisohma:princessyukisohma 37 8 Woody Tee Hee by princessyukisohma Woody Tee Hee :iconprincessyukisohma:princessyukisohma 6 8 This isn't a picture of Lottie by princessyukisohma This isn't a picture of Lottie :iconprincessyukisohma:princessyukisohma 2 1 Prince Naveen by princessyukisohma Prince Naveen :iconprincessyukisohma:princessyukisohma 2 0 Princess and the Frog Meme by princessyukisohma Princess and the Frog Meme :iconprincessyukisohma:princessyukisohma 5 10 I have no reason to live... by princessyukisohma I have no reason to live... :iconprincessyukisohma:princessyukisohma 3 11


BBC OT3s by humon BBC OT3s :iconhumon:humon 5,710 189 Bad Education by humon Bad Education :iconhumon:humon 2,805 192 Magical Men by humon Magical Men :iconhumon:humon 4,612 575 Old and New meet by humon Old and New meet :iconhumon:humon 5,636 714 Science Bros Ask 34 by ecokitty Science Bros Ask 34 :iconecokitty:ecokitty 1,212 62 Fwip fwip by bababug Fwip fwip :iconbababug:bababug 174 11 Two Detectives by humon Two Detectives :iconhumon:humon 2,065 212 FitzSimmons! by bababug FitzSimmons! :iconbababug:bababug 255 27 Sexy Scandinavian by humon Sexy Scandinavian :iconhumon:humon 5,651 586 What to wait next by Tsuki-Nekota What to wait next :icontsuki-nekota:Tsuki-Nekota 1,533 201 Sherlock Holmes sketches by humon Sherlock Holmes sketches :iconhumon:humon 5,719 336 FOE tribute art by SweetEggyRoll FOE tribute art :iconsweeteggyroll:SweetEggyRoll 256 29 Not Coming This Fall by kevinbolk Not Coming This Fall :iconkevinbolk:kevinbolk 2,377 744 THORMENTED by RinGreen THORMENTED :iconringreen:RinGreen 1,037 77 +SQUIB X PUMPKIN+ by C2ndy2c1d +SQUIB X PUMPKIN+ :iconc2ndy2c1d:C2ndy2c1d 576 27


  • Listening to: Beatles
  • Reading: Ishmael
  • Playing: Some kinda card or board game
  • Eating: EVERYTHING
  • Drinking: Water
I have many characters in my brain. And I want to see if they're Mary-Sue's or nawt.

I'm going to pick from my made up band. I start with Dex because he's droomer.

Mary-Sue/Gary-Stu Test.

Subject: Dex.

[ ] They are possessed by an angel
[ ] They are possessed by a demon
[ ] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie (vampire)
[/] They are physically strong.
[ ] They have a rare hair/fur color
[ ] Their eyes are an unusual color
[ ] This happens to be red
[ ] Their eyes change color
[ ] They have wings
[ ] They can grow extra body parts/shapeshift
[ ] They are immortal
[ ] (if a female) they have large boobs
[ ] (if a male) they are very muscular
[/] They are very attractive to the opposite gender.
[ ] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc
[ ] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc
[ ] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers
[ ] They have a special ability/power, but they don't know about it yet
[ ] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers
[ ] They are a healer
[ ] They are from a very rich/royal family
[ ] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background
[ ] They have lost one/both of their parents
[ ] They ran away from home
[ ] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
[ ] They witnessed one/both of their parent's death
[ ] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature (demon robot)
[ ] They never knew their parents
[ ] They were abused/spoiled as a child
[/] They are very attractive to the same gender
[/] They have lots of friends/no friends
[ ] They are emo/cutesy
[ ] They look much younger/older than they really are.
[ ] They are currently in a relationship
[ ] They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit for example: 'I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend' 'Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family' 'I wouldn't hesitate to die in place of a friend' etc. It's fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem.
[ ] They have a mental disorder
[ ] They have an emotional disorder
[ ] They struggle to stay sane
[ ] They are a psycho
[ ] They have multiple personalities
[ ] They are very intelligent
[ ] They have hallucinations
[ ] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.
[ ] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet
[ ] They have a guardian spirit
[ ] They have a 'special type' of soul
[ ] Their soul is not the same as them
[ ] They can talk to spirits/ghosts
[ ] Some part of their body glows
[/] They have a rare/unusual name
[ ] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc.
[ ] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth/a young age
[ ] They are connected with a certain element
[ ] They are connected with a certain animal
[/] They always dress like a certain 'label'
[ ] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga
[ ] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood
[ ] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared
[ ] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives
[ ] They are hiding from someone/something
[ ] They have a rare blood type
[ ] They cry blood
[ ] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown
[ ] They are from a different country to where they live
[ ] They are very mysterious/dark
[/] They are very lively/happy
[ ] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly
[ ] They are very patient
[ ] They are from a long line of (Insert profession/Power here: )
[x] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear
[ ] They have amnesia
[ ] They have some sort of permanent medical condition
[ ] They have a curse upon them
[ ] They are involved in some sort of prophecy
[ ] They are 'the chosen one'
[ ] They have insomnia

Overall points: 4.5

Take points off your OC's overall score if they fit any of the following statements:

[ ] They smoke
[ ] They are an alcoholic
[ ] They are overweight
[ ] They are addicted to drugs
[ ] They have a short temper
[ ] They enjoy bullying others
[ ] They do not care much about others
[ ] They are emotionless

Point Reductions: 0

Final score: 4.5

< 5 Anti-Sue
Your character may be a bit on the boring side. Of course, this does depend, but generally if they are scoring that low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them up' a bit ^^

6-15 Balanced Character
If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though.

16-25 Borderline Mary-Sue/Gary-Stu
We have a problem. You need to tone your character down. They are most likely a bit annoying to others, too.

26+ Mary-Sue/Gary-Stu

Well then.

Journal History


Artist | Hobbyist | Varied
United States
Current Residence: Under a Rock
Favourite genre of music: The kind that inspires me to draw stuff
Favourite style of art: Comics and Manga
Personal Quote: "I'm not a vampire, I was just thirsty!"



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Tsuki-Nekota Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2013  Student General Artist
Thanks for the watch :icongaywinkplz:~:heart:
princessyukisohma Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
you are most welcome ^_^
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"Thank you for the watch!"
princessyukisohma Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You are most welcome =)
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ta for the fav!
princessyukisohma Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
you're welcome!
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Thank you for the love, Love :)
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